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Posted by paul watt on July 13, 2008, 12:35 pm
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> On Sun, 13 Jul 2008 13:33:48 +0100, paul watt writ:
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>> Hi Guys and Gals,
>> Just revamped my web site. I've maintaind the feel of the original site,
>> just given it a "web 2.0" make over.sort of.
>> The url is http://www.paulwatt.info/paulwatt/ and the original is still
>> http://www.paulwatt.info for comparison.
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>> cheers
>>
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> Looks good to me. :-)
>
> Some typos I noticed if you're interested:
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> "Paul Watt Designs have designed for the music industry,charity's and
> clubs."
> apostrophe
>
> "You provide a design brief; Colours, fonts you like,"
> should be a colon
>
> "Prices start from £150"
> period
>
> "today's modern coding techniques which encourage the following;"
> colon
>
> "cleaner fast loading pages"
> cleaner, faster loading
>
> "Alternatively if you already have a website, Paul Watt designs also
> offer"
> offers
>
> "Or alternatively, Use the form below."
> use
>
> --
> "Because all you of Earth are idiots!"
> ¯`·.¸¸.·´¯`·-> freemont© <-·´¯`·.¸¸.·´¯
Thanks Freemont, I copy writing isnt my thing!
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Paul Watt
http://www.paulwattdesigns.com http://www.yoofo.co.uk
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