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Hi, all:

Please take a look at /

I would like input about the navigation, if you know what this is for when
you first see it, if it sells itself, if you know what to do once on the
site.. things like that.

All comments welcome. I'm just trying to see if there are any obvious things
I've missed before making it live.

Thanx in Advance

Re: critique wanted

On Sat, 11 Feb 2006 01:40:43 +0000, Mike wrote:

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1. The name made me think of Truman Capote.

2. It doesn't resize.


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Re: critique wanted

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I find the faint brown text on white extremely difficult to read. There
is a disembodied short golden vertical bar three quarters of the way
through the text block that appears to start with which
I see in Safari. It is the only vertical golden bar I see. I went far
enough to view your source. I'll let others comment on that including
validation if they wish.
<> may be a better venue
for pure site aesthetics. You'll get ripped for your HTML, CSS,
Javascript and everything else here.



Re: critique wanted

With neither quill nor qualm, Mike quothed:

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To be honest, it didn't look very good in any of the browsers I viewed
it in.

I didn't check the markup but suspect errors and lackings therein.

My advice is that you need to spend more time on it, possibly comparing
your results to other web pages that appeal to you.

Contrary to popular belief, it is believable.


__/ [Mike] on Saturday 11 February 2006 01:40 \__

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Read it and internalise, please.

Best wishes,


Re: critique wanted

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Apart from too wide for many resolutions, requiring horizontal
scrolling, (no one likes this), there are more mistakes and poor
practice in the css and html than you can poke a stick at,
starting with no doctype declaration in the html. Put one in,

" ">

and try to validate your html and css and look at all the
warnings and comments. In css you give no units

Did you write this or generate it with something?


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